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Such a Beautiful Thing

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I expected your kiss,
Just not the flare of this craving in return,
Wanting more of the soft sensations of your lips.

And never did I expect you to taste so good,
As if nothing else seemed to exist for a moment but you,
The love I can feel in you and the denial that I couldn't possibly love you more.

And your whispers unexpectedly made me think of scented oil,
Leaving me day dreaming of caressing you,
And realizing it's how your voice always makes me feel.
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Which would you enjoy more: affect someone else unexpectedly all the time like this with your voice, or to be affected unexpectedly all the time like this by someone else voice?
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senseinomake's avatar
The writing is really vivid:) thanks for the fave btw