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I love you too

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I hate hanging up on you after the way you say "I love you."
Somehow totally pronouncing the period while simply saying "I love you".
It's one of the constant feelings I have with you,
Leaving me mindlessly craving for more.

I love how your voice strikes my inner sides,
But not how it happens to take over my mind.
And it never seems to strike alone because of my love for you,
A love I risk to trust in all the beautiful lies.

So I try to savor your words in my mind,
The way your voice holds my heart away,
The river of longing lit by your smile,
Every moment of what we have.
Do you prefer someone you love to have an absolutely affecting voice on you or would you prefer to have resistance to it, even if you may not feel that feeling ever again?

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Nicolekaedan's avatar
I loved your peice.. its very nice. Its too bad that i just found out the person i thought i loved and loved me back cheated on me over the weeked.. and the worst part of it is i still want to be with him.. but any way i hope i can find someone.. and i still love your work! :hug: