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I wonder if you could sense how I feel when I look at you,
Tilting my head to the side when I smile with you.
The way I feel when I listen to you,
The anticipation in my stomach right before seeing you.

I could hold my breath counting the number of stars I see in your eyes,
Stretch my fingertips to graze the surface of your lips,
And slowly, tenderly,
Fall in love with the way you look at me every time.

I sometimes wonder if you could see all this in my eyes,
Recognize the feeling of my heart in my voice,
Feel the tenderness of my mind lost in translation,
A heart wavering like an angel hair in the wind.
Happy Valentine's day ;p :glomp:

Life is short. live it. Love is rare, grab it. Anger is bad, dump it. Fear is awful, face it. Memories are sweet, cherish it. If you enjoyed something from this poem, fav it :blush:

Edit: Okay *laughs* someone asked about the ending of 'angel hair' in the wind..."angel hair" is also a type of spaghetti ;p the thinnest hand made. It's a double metaphor! a thin piece of string, what a heart feels like, hand made, and tossed around in an ocean where it's like a small soft bendable breakable thing flying in the wind forever lost...and unpredictably may land on something solidly good, or drowningly bad -remind me now I have idea for the next poem ;p
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MsVictoria055 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012
I love it! :heart:
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012   Writer
:hug::eager:
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MsVictoria055 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2012
:hug:
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KikyouStorm Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012
oh wow. another lovely poem :)
you are very good.

sorry i am late looking at your poems..
been busy with college T-T
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012   Writer
*laughs* I hope you are making a lot of effort and doing well! Thank you as always for being such a wonderful supporter of my writing :hug: :)
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KikyouStorm Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012
i am! got a b- in algebra...
and thankful too... 3rd times the charm....
yeah.
and an A in a special edition of an anthropology course.
and that's just the summer...

i cant wait for the fall...

No problem, you are a great writer!
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012   Writer
LOL Good job! Keep up the amazing work! These are definitely achievements to be proud of :eager::glomp:
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KikyouStorm Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012
:D

thank you for telling me that

:cuddle:
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012   Writer
:hug:
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KikyouStorm Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2012
:squee:
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Just-living Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're an amazing writer, and I love talking to you. you're very intelligent and sweet! hope I can get to know you better soon.
This is just amazing. Thanks for sharing with the world!<3
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2012   Writer
LOL I enjoy talking with you too :) and havn't we known each other for a long time? ;p I do appreciate you taking your time to leave a most random positive comment on my writing :hug: This is very sweet
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Just-living Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I LOVE your writing! I always have, just jealous of how good you are. Maybe I'll get that good in time too. :) it's a gift to log on here and see you've wrote something new.
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nymphadora-marie Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012
amazing. beautiful. :D
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2012   Writer
I am happy you think so :hug:
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dianamreiland Featured By Owner May 24, 2012  Student Artist
beautiful
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner May 29, 2012   Writer
I'm happy you think so! :eager::hug:
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jjthedemon Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2012
:heart:'s share it
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012   Writer
Thank you!! Summer is almost here! :eager:
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jjthedemon Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012
Yea! What are you doin this summer?
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012   Writer
Work and volunteer!
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jjthedemon Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2012
That's fun!
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quoctruong Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2012
I died a little inside. Beautifully written as always and you always seem to somehow leave the reader feeling utterly moved. :love:
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012   Writer
Thanks so much, so very much! I love your always so supportive comments :blushes::thanks:
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quoctruong Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012
You are more than welcome! :)
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Annalinah Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2012
very nice
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012   Writer
Thank you :)
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MissRose18 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2012   General Artist
Another beautiful piece.
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012   Writer
Thanks so much, so so much! I really appreciate your continuous support of my writing :glomp:
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TheHonestMan Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2012
Extremely eloquent as always huh C:

I sometimes wonder though, if you'd ever write about something other than love. But I suppose everyone has a forte, and as the old saying goes; if it ain't broke, don't fix it.

Hopefully you had a nice Valentine's Day ♥.

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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2012   Writer
Lol thanks Tamara :glomp: I'm glad you think so

I of course have written about things other than love. But that's not what I use my dA account to share *smiles*

I had a great valentine's day! How about you?
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TheHonestMan Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2012
Oh, no problem at all :D

Haha, yeah, I figured as much. But either way, it does seem that's what you're best at, so I understand that.

But hey, that's great, I'm glad! Mine was basically just another normal day; went to school, etc. So, okay I suppose :aww:
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2012   Writer
:glomp:
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Toshiros24 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2012  Student Photographer
Is it for a special someone? Hmmm? :) >.>
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2012   Writer
*smiles* Of course, now move along ;p
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jodi-kaos Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2012  Professional General Artist
And even still, you continue to amaze me with your lovely writing. :heart:
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2012   Writer
*blushes deeply* :blushes::glomp: Thank you for your wonderful continuous support of my writing! :hug:
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Lived-Laughed-Loving Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I would break the Favourite button on this one!!!! It's amazing, so impeccably worded and conveys the simplest feelings with the most beautiful words possible... Stunning, probably my favourite of your so far
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2012   Writer
LOL thanks! I really appreciate you taking your time in leaving this wonderful feedback :glomp:
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Lived-Laughed-Loving Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It really was just like I said :3 Fantastic
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2012   Writer
:blush:
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SteeKira Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2012  Student General Artist
Once again, another epic piece. *faved* *applauds* well said young man.
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2012   Writer
*laughs* Thanks so much for your wonderful continuous support of my writing! :eager::thanks::glomp:
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SteeKira Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2012  Student General Artist
You're welcome. :)
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Bee89 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2012
very sweet and relatable great job!
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2012   Writer
Thanks! Thank you so much! :blush::eager::glomp:
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lunas-brightlight Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2012
I love this very very much. You can definitely feel the love and caring in this beautiful poem. :heart:
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2012   Writer
:hug::glomp: Thank you so much for your continuous support of my writing! :eager:
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lunas-brightlight Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2012
always - even tho I get the standard boilerplate ty :D
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2012   Writer
LOL Standard boilerplate! I love the way you describe things. *grins* What would you rather get then? ;p
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