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If I could write a poem to make you fall in love with me,
I would have done it the moment I met you,
The moment I felt you smile..
The time you took me with that kiss.

I always want to make the world better wherever I go,
Speak my words and strengthen every person's will.
But every time I see you it's I who couldn't speak,
And whenever you touch me my world's perfectly complete.

So maybe tomorrow I will be able to write the poem I long to write you,
Look you in the eyes and tell you how much I really want you too.
It shouldn't be that hard to say a short "I love you",
But falling in love has even taken me to a place far from complete.
Even the most spontaneous of people can be anything but spontaneous when faced with a love never felt before. Somehow the act of opening our hearts makes us stronger, even as it makes us more vulnerable. But it's worth it, even when it doesn't pay off, sometimes. *smiles*

Image Contribution by:
*TikiLlanes
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Image "Rehearsal" by *TikiLlanes [link]


Philosophical Inspiration:
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My friend Katarina ~AzourasTintomara


Submitted for Contest: [link]
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Wish me luck!
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Myrethy Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Is it weird that I love your artist's comment more than the actual poem itself? Well, if it is, I don't care, because those words are AMAZING.
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013   Writer
Not weird to me *smiles* and I'm rather glad to know it is so. I think I like that you also enjoys the way I speak or think translated into writing as well *grins* :blush:
Thank you for taking your time in leaving this wonderful feedback
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Myrethy Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're ver welcome! :huggle: I really do like that quote, too.
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013   Writer
:hug:
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Sohle1 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
one of my fave! love it! :)
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011   Writer
Lol I'm glad this is your fav! It's one of mine too! :glomp:
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Sohle1 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
yup! :)
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kidotrar Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Another one to add to my collection of favorites from you. =)
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2011   Writer
LOL thank you! so much! :glomp:
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topVase Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2010  Professional Interface Designer
Luck for the Contest! :) Good work
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Bleach502307 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2010
Love it!
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secret-evil Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Amazing..I am struggling to find the words to describe this poem. So I will just leave it at that.
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NocturneJewel Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2010
This is so true and so beautiful.
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starfallz25 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2010
that was beautiful... to say in the least. i is jealous >.<
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zamira19 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Love it! :)
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AzourasTintomara Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2010
That turned out really, really beautiful! It's a poem to love :)
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yumbulunnosthas Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2010
I like this!!! <3
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Amarucha Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I hope you win =) And just btw, I just realized, that I'm on crush with some person, and then I read this.. I LOVE IT! ^-^
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cookiedoughkitty377 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
love this poem! ^^
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Panda-Poodle Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2010  Student General Artist
I can really relate to the first two lines.
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baileysmomentsintime Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2010   Photographer
Good luck on your contest :)
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