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Some people said my words are fake because they sound so beautiful,
That it is always a good prudence to feel that things feel too good to be true.
People are not supposed to care, to see beauty in the plainest of things.
It's just like beliefs are not supposed to be true and there's no such thing as true love too.

Still I continued to write out all the beautiful things I know,
Trust in love that feels too good to be true,
Care for people I should never have cared for,
And never once looked to you.

But now you are the only one I speak to,
The only one who's heard all my ugly stories of love,
The only one who have always seen through my poems,
The only one in my life I feel may be too good to be true.
20100428

If you cannot be the poet, be the poem.
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:iconperidot-magelette:
peridot-magelette Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2010
aaaaaaaaaawwww.....
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Sally78 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Awesome poem =)
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:iconablondmoment:
aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2010   Writer
Thank you!
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:iconsally78:
Sally78 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome =)
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:iconablondmoment:
aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2010   Writer
:hug:
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Lonely-Insomniac Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
ur the only one girl. the only one
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indigobluebookworm Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2010  Student
This is amazing!!! I love it!!! I'd love to see more!!!
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cookiedoughkitty377 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
beautiful
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rawwwrrrface Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010
Amazing! Thats all i can say! But, thats an understatement. Theres no real word I can think of to describe it. Its just that good!
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:iconbeyondtheobvious2012:
absolutely beautiful...why must people be so pessimistic about being an optimist??
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