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Behind closed doors we fall in each other's arms,
Like finding consolation in trust of our dreams.
But only in evenings,
When all the thorns have been shed away.

And comes the steady glow of the moon reflecting in your eyes,
The steady warmth I can feel glowing from your skin.
However when you blink,
The world seems to waver at its brink of life.

Still nothing seems close to describing this moment of us together,
Just another of the many we will probably forget.
But like the millions of love stories left unread,
It's as beautiful as any love could be tonight.
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Have you ever felt this way with anyone?
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Loupiotte1203 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2010
it's so beautiful and romantic :heart:
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topVase Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2010  Professional Interface Designer
Nice thing. I like it
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IshiKai Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2010
Am.. You know, man.. I don't know what to say now. I think I should watch you from now on.
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ellamarie25 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2010
mmm, this reallllly tugs at the heart-strings.. mine in particular. this is gorgeous. :)
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Madoriko-Rose Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
This is magnificent. wonderfully written. I especially love the detail.
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cookiedoughkitty377 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
this is beautifully written!!! :D
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VirtuallySane Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2010
every time i read one of your poems I can picture every word in my mind!
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Kaz-D Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
I imagine what feeling this way would feel like :) You've capture it spot on.
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secret-evil Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Your love poetry always amazes me.
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rawwwrrrface Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010
OMG! I do feel this way right now. I love it!!!
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Delilah-Loveless Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Once again I bow down to the master of goosebumb inducing poems :)

Wonderfull, recognizable and inspiring as always.
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TheseDaysNeverDie Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2010
This piece means more to me than you can even fathom.
I'm in a secret relationship right now, because of an age difference that would be unacceptable to most people, because I'm underage, and he's not. We meet at nights, and sometimes we go to his house, other nights mine, and sometimes we just sit outside at a park just down the road from his house under the street lights. Every moment with him is like a little piece of heaven that I stole, and I cherish every second I can spend with him.
This writing captured my thoughts everytime I see him, and I'd just like to say thank you so much for writing such beautiful words, I cannot fathom the thanks you deserve. <3
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Kay-Johanna Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2010
this is so beautiful!! :D
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