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Nothing is certain when we are apart.
Even the weather is unpredictable,
And the flame of my wanting of you flares like a lonely fire,
Amid an island empty of love.

And when I am with you everything feels fine.
Like being just where I want to be,
Everything I care to have,
Holding you close with little more than a true love in between.

So have me if you want,
Love me if you still do,
For the millions of wanting I predictably could list,
You are the only one for me.
20100519

Can you feel the love?
:pc::blushes:
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since91 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Your poems are inspiring. This is so sweet, I can actually feel it. :aww:
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2010   Writer
*smiles* thank you :)
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since91 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
:hug: You're welcome. It was my pleasure. :)
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2010   Writer
:hug: *smiles*
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icy-moon-shadow Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2010
A simple but amazing poem! This is great :) My favorite line is "Holding you close with little more than a true love in between".
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topVase Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2010  Professional Interface Designer
Maybe anyone in the world is feeled the love one time. The problem is he didn't know what is the love...
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artandattitude Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2010  Student Photographer
Lovely
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WrittenStar Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
I'm currently missing a special someone right now, so I appreciate this.
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Azilda Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2010  Student General Artist
You inspire me. SO MUCH.
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VirtuallySane Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2010
I can feel the love
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CoNqUeR-TiMe Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2010  Student Writer
wow is all i can say
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Johnray Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2010
kekeke yes yes feel the love alright
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shruti-illusion Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2010
Yes.. I could! Thanks for sharing..
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Phantom-Wolf42 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Love, something so many crave and so few find.

At least truly.

Very nice work, I really like this.
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Lady-Achika Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2010
I can definitely feel the love. I can definitely taste the brilliance.
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Super-Juniorheechul Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
O.M.G...this is amazing.
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zamira19 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
This is a very lovely poem, that is simple, yet says so much. :)
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secret-evil Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Very cute and sentimental.
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AlextheHedgehog16 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Absolutely beautiful :) It truly expresses the love and longing (like all your work) and I can really relate to this.
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OurBlueRose Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Amazing, like the rest of what I have read so far. How do you stay so inspired all the time?
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BlueWolf100996 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2010  Student General Artist
I definitely feel the love; so beautiful :love: It's simple but it speaks volumes
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bookworm012496 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2010  Student Writer
lol I LUV THIS!! Which is totally predictable ;) considering I luv all of ur writing
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