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I want to absorb your tears with my chest,
Taste the saltiness with my heart,
Leaving it to dry where it is,
And feel the warmth of you in my arms.

I took off my shirt for you to blow your nose,
So I can hear you breathe out in relief.
And it comes in such small warm gasps,
That I wish to collect them all just to keep you from the cold.

And tomorrow we are going to wake up and just be friends again.
There will be no more tears or warmth of unshed love.
So I feel I should be the one crying now,
Because I could not have loved you more.
:blushes: Have you been to that unfair side of love? What was it like?

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AprilSilverWolf Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Yes. Always on the short end of it.
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012   Writer
:( Me too!
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KikyouStorm Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012
awh. so sad...
oh? to answer your question...
hmm... well... i still feel that, i guess.
this guy friend of mine wants to hang with me but not be with me...
it does hurt a lot...
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012   Writer
:hug: We all get our turns..
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KikyouStorm Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012
yeah.
but everything happens for a reason, even pain.

i'm over him now.

:cuddle:
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012   Writer
:hug:
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KikyouStorm Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012
:hug:

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ChaosDemon07 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2012
My girlfriend is leaving for Alaska in 9 days... active duty.. she said since we're going our separate ways, she didn't want to be in a serious relationship but that she will always love and care about me. This shit hurts, knowing she will be gone. I just want to hold her close and kiss her again if she didn't live so far away. I miss her touch, her warmth. i wish for the best for those in similar relationships. it's never easy.
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012   Writer
The truly most valuable things in life that lasts through time never are the things that comes easy, not just for you, but for her as well :)

Thank you for taking your time in sharing this personal story :thanks:
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jjthedemon Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012
It hurts. Every night it felt like my heart was breaking, but at least time heals all.

Your poem was amazing :)
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012   Writer
:hug: Time doesn't. It just helps us heal ourselves :) :hug: Thank you for taking your time to leave this feed back, and all of your supports of my writing over the past years
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jjthedemon Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012
and I will support your writing for all the years to come :)
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012   Writer
*blushes deeply*
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jjthedemon Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012
:)
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WyvernFlames Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Student General Artist
It hurts man. Recently went through a breakup like this, where 2 years faded for him but I loved him ever so much and still do. It pains me watching him move on but I'm stuck loving him.

Beautiful poem sir. It really spoke to me.
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012   Writer
Thank you for taking your time to share this :hug::huggle:
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SteeKira Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Student General Artist
Oh yes....yes I have...once when I was in love with my best friend while he loved another girl at the time.

Then later after some soap opera drama, he and I ended up together, but broke up due to personal reasons.

I cried so hard both those times. Didn't know what to do with myself.

Eventually, though he and I got back together. We've grown up and were ready to be together again and do this for real. Some say it's a happy ending, I see it more as a new begining. :)
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012   Writer
*laughs* Okay okay I get that you believe in second chances *smiles*. Who knows, maybe i would too from your opinion ;p

I do believe that anything we want in life to happen can be achieved if enough, and the right efforts are given. But then that is the hard part *smiles*

Thank you for taking your time in sharing all this :hug:
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SteeKira Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Student General Artist
:hugs: XD no problem! And I agree...:) Such is life, right?
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012   Writer
Maybe *grins* ;p
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SteeKira Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012  Student General Artist
XD
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quoctruong Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2012
I haven't been to the unfair side of love because I haven't been to the fair side of it, yet. As always, beautifully crafted and exceptionally well written Logan. :thumbsup:
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012   Writer
Thank you once again :eager:!!! I really appreciate you taking your time to leave this feedback and of all the support you've given in my writing :) :thanks:
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AChildOfTheKing Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
it is nice to hear from you again. more in the future?
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2012   Writer
Of course :) I will try.. :hug:
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random-art816 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012
You never cease to impress me.
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2012   Writer
*smiles* Let's make it last then :)
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Safe-As-Houses Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Know that feeling all too well... :'( You capture it beautifully in this.
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2012   Writer
Thank you for taking your time in leaving this feedback :hug:
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Safe-As-Houses Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
My pleasure, my friend. :)
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Den-Lille-Friken Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Too damned true.

It's so damned unfair :(
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2012   Writer
:blush: yes. :hug:
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Alliegirl4eva Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2011
Yes. thougt it wasn't fair but everybody around me told me to move on and get over it the one person you can trust that won't be there to say 'Do what you think is right.'
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2011   Writer
:hug: Thank you for taking your time to share this :thanks:
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Alliegirl4eva Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2011
No problem... I had some free time and was on and I do really like what you write.
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ohyescesc Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Hi you should join our group called love for the lovers! we'd love to see your poetry in our galleries. Check out the poetry contest and glance over the rules. Hope you join! [link]
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2011   Writer
thanks for reading! I'm glad you like it! :eager:
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ohyescesc Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah i liked it that link is broken so here it is
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taube3 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2010
so sad. love is unfair. i have been on the unfair side, but not quite like that
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2010   Writer
*smiles* :glomp:
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RikkuFang Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2010
Like this one alot :)
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2010   Writer
Thank you!
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xxxdeath-lifexxx Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2010   Writer
love can be unfair but we continue on anyway
very good
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2010   Writer
:O wow you do dig in from a month ago
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CAmpoo691 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
:') :heart:
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2010   Writer
*smiles happily*
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CAmpoo691 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
:la:
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2010  Student Interface Designer
Wow, that's really sad... and I love it ^^
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2010   Writer
I'm happy you do :) :dance:
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2010  Student Interface Designer
:icongoofygrinplz:
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