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It's like finding a connection into my own heart,
To gaze into the beautiful of something that could one day feel terrible,
Trust in that you won't look away,
At least not before your heart slips from mine.
And I wish for it to never slip from mine,
Because the only music I long to hear are your whispers in my ears,
The only promises of happiness I need,
And perhaps a little more taste of your soft soft lips.
I love you, incredibly,
And hope you feel the same indefinitely,
Because I feel I want you so much you could not possibly imagine,
And love you in a way where no part of my heart could be left hidden.
To gaze into the beautiful of something that could one day feel terrible,
Trust in that you won't look away,
At least not before your heart slips from mine.
And I wish for it to never slip from mine,
Because the only music I long to hear are your whispers in my ears,
The only promises of happiness I need,
And perhaps a little more taste of your soft soft lips.
I love you, incredibly,
And hope you feel the same indefinitely,
Because I feel I want you so much you could not possibly imagine,
And love you in a way where no part of my heart could be left hidden.
Literature
i will love you forever
I Will Love You Forever
I love you so deeply,
I love you so much,
I love the sound of your voice
And the way that we touch.
I love your warm smile
and your kind, thoughtful way,
the joy that you bring
to my life every day.
I love you today
as I have from the start,
and I'll love you forever
with all of my heart
When I'm with you,
eternity is a step away;
my love continues to grow,
with each passing day.
This treasure of love,
I cherish within my soul,
how much I love you,
you'll never really know.
You bring a joy to my heart,
I've never felt before,
with each touch of your heart,
I love you more and more.
W
Literature
What I see when I look
You're eyes sparkle with an intelligence
that speaks of untold starscapes long gone beyond
Your smile is reminiscent of the fey in their fine faery homes
a drop of mischief and a hint of danger
Your voice is melodic, bringing to mind the fantasies of the isle..
Perhaps a sirens call to the unwary
or perhaps a promise of things to come
Your laugh infuses me with mirth
as contagious as the mischief in your smile
And when you look into my eyes I wonder what it is that you see
but dare not ask because that would be far too bold
Literature
A Beautiful Moment
"You're beautiful."
"You're blind."
"You're stunning."
"You're lying."
"You're my everything."
"You're stupid."
"You're amazing."
No response.
"You're fantastic."
No response.
"You're incredible."
No response.
"You're marvelous."
No response.
"You're magnificent."
No response.
"You're wonderful."
"Shut up."
"You're unbelievable."
No response.
"You're extraordinary."
No response.
"You're phenomenal."
No response.
"You're breathtaking."
No response.
"You're remarkable."
No response.
"You're sensational."
No response.
"You're stupendous."
No response.
"You're spectacular."
No response.
"You're fabulous."
No res
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Themed music Song For Sienna by Brian Crain www.youtube.com/watch?v=DNVY0U…
Edit: One of my watchers brought up a question asking a more in depth revealing of the meanings behind at least the first stanza, and how pessimistic it sounds etc. The answer to some of the questions are here:
"To gaze into the beautiful of something that could one day feel terrible" as most love relationships doesn't end up happily ever after.....so it's rather clear that there's a good chance, that whomever it is that one loves and is looking into the eyes of could one day feel terrible no matter how beautiful the moment is, and for a moment such as in this poem, as they are looking into their partner's eyes, they feel that doubt. It's in describing the uncertainty people feel. Everyone has uncertainty at times of love no matter how short the period or how many times throughout the relationship.
"Trust in that you won't look away" Most of those people would hold onto the beautiful moment they are feeling anyway even if they are glazed with that doubt, and for the time being trust that the other person will never leave them because to give that chance to someone, in itself is also the act of allowing the opportunity for that someone to give you that chance too. A relationship has to be worked both ways, but the first step has to be for both people to keep their doors open to the other. Whether the trust is deserved or not it doesn't matter for that moment, what matters is that we give it, and build on it with someone we feel are special to us.
"At least not before your heart slips from mine" Is the last line of the first stanza, meaning to put that pessimism under the priority of something else, and that is to prop up something more important to focus on, than the thought that someone they love's heart might slip away from them one day, and that is everything "before" that (when their heart does slip away). This is based on the thought to make do with what they have and to treasure every moment they could have, and to build what they have to last as long as possible while trusting the other to do the same. And it is with that thought that the 2nd constructive part of this event during a relationship is possible, leading into the 2nd stanza of the reflection and realization of the what is, not the what ifs and what not. This poem is meant to portray the beginning, the middle and the resolution of all doubts that comes to a relationship of true love no matter how random.
There are many lessons but the main one is that no matter how dire the mood of any of the partners, no matter how dark and hopeless, the right thoughts, actions and choices can change everything, and there's always solution to the problems if only we can all focus on the things most important to not just each individuals involved, but both parties. Btw that would be love
For Contest by Inspiring-Words
Themed music Song For Sienna by Brian Crain www.youtube.com/watch?v=DNVY0U…
Edit: One of my watchers brought up a question asking a more in depth revealing of the meanings behind at least the first stanza, and how pessimistic it sounds etc. The answer to some of the questions are here:
"To gaze into the beautiful of something that could one day feel terrible" as most love relationships doesn't end up happily ever after.....so it's rather clear that there's a good chance, that whomever it is that one loves and is looking into the eyes of could one day feel terrible no matter how beautiful the moment is, and for a moment such as in this poem, as they are looking into their partner's eyes, they feel that doubt. It's in describing the uncertainty people feel. Everyone has uncertainty at times of love no matter how short the period or how many times throughout the relationship.
"Trust in that you won't look away" Most of those people would hold onto the beautiful moment they are feeling anyway even if they are glazed with that doubt, and for the time being trust that the other person will never leave them because to give that chance to someone, in itself is also the act of allowing the opportunity for that someone to give you that chance too. A relationship has to be worked both ways, but the first step has to be for both people to keep their doors open to the other. Whether the trust is deserved or not it doesn't matter for that moment, what matters is that we give it, and build on it with someone we feel are special to us.
"At least not before your heart slips from mine" Is the last line of the first stanza, meaning to put that pessimism under the priority of something else, and that is to prop up something more important to focus on, than the thought that someone they love's heart might slip away from them one day, and that is everything "before" that (when their heart does slip away). This is based on the thought to make do with what they have and to treasure every moment they could have, and to build what they have to last as long as possible while trusting the other to do the same. And it is with that thought that the 2nd constructive part of this event during a relationship is possible, leading into the 2nd stanza of the reflection and realization of the what is, not the what ifs and what not. This poem is meant to portray the beginning, the middle and the resolution of all doubts that comes to a relationship of true love no matter how random.
There are many lessons but the main one is that no matter how dire the mood of any of the partners, no matter how dark and hopeless, the right thoughts, actions and choices can change everything, and there's always solution to the problems if only we can all focus on the things most important to not just each individuals involved, but both parties. Btw that would be love
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I love it. It's just beautiful 💖