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I want to walk side by side with you under the stars,
Hold hands with you under the candle light,
Let my mind waver when you hold me close,
The way my heart soars at the sight of your smile.

When I speak I could see your eyes come alive,
Your kind face echoing expressions of everything I like.
And you always take your time when you do arrive,
Making me screaming warm and everything inside.

I laid in bed this day and thought of you,
The trees fluttered with the wind as I missed you.
I know it isn't going to be very long,
But I think this is how we know we are in love.
Sorry this poem took quite a few weeks to finish! :eager:

How do you think you know when you are in love? :)

Short story: I had a rare dream today of an ex posting a picture of a group of people on deviantart. In the comment box she asked what people think if her man looks like the guy on the far left etc. The me in the dream then looked, and it was a guy who looked like me, but not me! *laughs* In the dream I had just woke up, and upon seeing that I got quite upset. I woke up then too and it actually took me a few minutes to realize it was only a dream. During which I thought of looking up on her deviantart page and posting some retort like "looks never have mattered that much to me ;p" lol and thought of how that would have been a little shallow of me. I think we all have done some shallow things at times. In the minutes it took me to wake up and calm down, *grins* I decided to unblock some people and such. I'm always pretty fair with people, though sometimes I think it isn't so bad either to give in a bit more. What do you think? ;p
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Nohimase Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013
the second stanza....especially the first line <3 <3 <3
and IMO, its when their very existence makes you happy to be alive, and that when you smile while with them, its somehow like your whole being smiles as well :) hehe
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013   Writer
*smiles* Thank you for taking your time to share this wonderful perspective :hug:
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XNedra22 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
There isn't one defining moment where you know for sure; rather when you look back to many moments you've shared with someone and it's like nothing else in this world matters.
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012   Writer
*smiles* You are right.And it's a wonderful thing if it's with someone that feels the same way about you.
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XNedra22 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes! :heart:
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LizaFizan Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012
Stunning.. Absolutely stunning :heart:
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012   Writer
Thank you, very very much :hug:
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LizaFizan Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012
No need to thank me, you deserve it! :hug:
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jynxwolfe Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love the way you play with words and can cause such a true response in your readers. It's nothing short of magical :)
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012   Writer
:hug: I love the way you resonates with the things I write of and provides such wonderful feedback :)
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Just-living Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wow<3
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012   Writer
*smiles* :hug:
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Just-living Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hey
I love it
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rmumpton Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012   Filmographer
Beautiful as always. Whenever I see a new post of yours, it is the first thing I open, as I always know it will bring a smile. This poem was especially nice and could't have come at the better time as I've been thinking about stuff along these lines the past few weeks, trying to figure out my feelings towards someone. Thank you my friend. You're a wonderful inspiration as always.
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012   Writer
LOL And I always don't know till I read your always unpredictable comments to find myself smiling or laughing too. Always such wonderful compliment makes me so glad that you enjoyed the writing :) I'm very happy and glad that you have found inspiration of this :eager:
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xLeah7x Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Wonderful words, here. Thanks for sharing!
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012   Writer
Thanks so much for taking your time in leaving this feedback! :eager::thanks:
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shittylife Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012
Oh how I love seeing your name in my messages. I am always guaranteed a wonderful read. Once again, I am not disappointed! I don't think there is a way of knowing that you are in love. I mean to each his/her own and you probably have your own way of knowing. I don't think there is this :idea: light bulb moment where you realize 'oh, this person is the one!' It's more like you subconsciously know for like forever that you have found the perfect one and your conscious mind just needs to catch up. Then it's more like, 'huh, so when did this person become everything I ever dreamed of?' I know I'm not making any sense but eh... :P

Once again, lovely to see your work again :D :hug:
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012   Writer
*smiles* :hug: This is very interesting perspective and reminds me of something someone has once told me :hug: Thank you for sharing this
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shittylife Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012
Very Welcome :)
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iamPoetry Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is a lovely read. I would love love to hear this spoken. You should give it try like I am.
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012   Writer
I will think about it ;p :hug:
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Nuru-Hana Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012   Writer
very cute :D :heart:
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012   Writer
Thank you :blushes:
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random-art816 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012
this is very nice, as usual :) its been a while since i've read your work
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012   Writer
*laughs* I can always count on you to appear randomly out of no where all the time ;p :hug: I'm happy you liked it :)
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random-art816 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012
hahaha well i'm glad :)
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TomDevil Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Student General Artist
<3 How does one know they are in love? When the thought of their smile makes your heart flutter, the memory of a specific look makes your knees weak, and when you can't possibly get them off your mind. Or at least those are some of the "symptoms" I think of.

Your words always bring out such wonderful images and brighten any sort of day. Thank you for posting them! :hug:
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012   Writer
*laughs* This is very sweet. Thank you so much for taking your time in sharing this, a poetry in itself :) :hug:
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