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You are more than the sweetness of my heart,
The glow in my smile you say is there,
The beauty of the winter in my eyes when I look upon the lonely trees outside
And when I breathe I want to breathe in only the scent of you.

I know you love me not because of some romantic imagination of a prince charming,
With shining armor and a winning smile or all the silly love poems.
Or maybe it is the silly love poems you like..
Silly words of my heart.

I know your heart beats with the fleeting rain,
A sense of something to treasure like love,
And in my heart,
A place that could never have enough of you.
Pieces of My Heart - I've given a lot of those out of love before and don't have much left but what i have left are all for you. Happy Valentine's Day :blushes:
Dedicated to Maria


Have you ever lost the words meant for someone that also meant a lot to you? I did today, as I accidentally closed the submit window, and deleted the words I had in a temporary note pad. :( Fortunately! Thanks to technology! dA has the first version I entered and it's all there! :eager:
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MaximoDaughtrybook Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012
oh, how beautiful!
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012   Writer
Thank you! :eager::thanks:
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quoctruong Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2011
Sooo god dam beautiful. :love:
Have you ever lost the words meant for someone that also meant a lot to you? Yeah!
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2011   Writer
haha! Thank you for sharing! Yes not a lot of people answer the questions *grins*
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Louised Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2011
Hi
I have featured this beautifully written poem here :[link] :clap:
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:iconablondmoment:
aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2011   Writer
:glomp:!
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Lonely-Insomniac Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2011   Writer
*grins*
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Louised Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2011
You have a couple of really awesome sentences here, Beautifully written, sweet :rose:
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2011   Writer
*smiles* Thank you Louise. I hope your weekend was good *grins*.
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in-the-dead-pixel Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2011
oh I do indeed hate the accidental delete...the one I have encountered most frequently, is my thumbs hovering over the touchpad of my laptop, and it somehow highlights all that I've typed up until wherever the cursor is sitting (often at the middle of the first line due to 'that's where you click to start typing in general'), and it starts writing right over everything I've previously written....SOMETIMES the ctrl-z works...but not often in a little response window like DA...


however...wonderful words nonetheless! Very well said ^_^

(would you believe the above small rant happened exactly once I started typing the first ^ ...must be my hovering and shift put together XD )
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2011   Writer
*laughs* Thank you so much for taking your time to leave this comment! :glomp:
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celticlamb Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Glad dA got your words back, dear. It's happened to me before and I know it sucks. *hugs*
This is very well written, like most all of your work that I've read. Great addition to single peoples awareness day. :)
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2011   Writer
*smiles* Thank you for your sweet continuous support of my writing :glomp:
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celticlamb Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Very much my pleasure, dear. You deserve it. <3
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TackyloveApple Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
so touching
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2011   Writer
I'm so happy you think so! :eager::thanks:
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TackyloveApple Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
your welcome
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Adianoeta Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2011
Who could ever have enough love like that. Warm and delightful
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2011   Writer
Thank you so much! :blushes::eager::thanks:
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TreenaElric Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2011
You, with this one poem, have given me the courage to write all the words and feelings I am afraid to convey. Thank you! :hugs:
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2011   Writer
thank you so much so so much for your continuous support of my writing! :glomp: and yes of course your ever sweet comments :)
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bookworm012496 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2011  Student Writer
awww Logan this is really sweet!
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2011   Writer
*laughs* Thanks Paige *grins* :glomp:
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bookworm012496 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2011  Student Writer
well you are in a good mood
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sakura11139 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2011  Student Photographer
bravo! :clap: a beautiful poem for a wonderful day haha youve done a great job haha :) i cant wait to see more :D and good luck with maria!!
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2011   Writer
*smiles* thank you Adrianna :hug:
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sakura11139 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2011  Student Photographer
you're welcome :) :hug:
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mackyster Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2011   Photographer
amazing =D
especially this line:
I know your heart beats with the fleeting rain,
good job!
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2011   Writer
*smiles* Thank you! Thank you for taking your time in leaving this comment!
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mackyster Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2011   Photographer
=D
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TomDevil Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2011  Student General Artist
For people who love as your words say you do I find it hard to believe that you would ever run out of pieces of your heart. Love is the ulimate cure after all. ^-^

Wonderful work, as always. I hope that you've had an amazing Valentine's Day. :) :hug:
TD
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2011   Writer
*laughs* Thank you, so much, so so much for your wonderful continuous support of my writing :glomp:
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nc1394 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2011  Student Writer
Good job...very nice...good for valentine's day, very sweet..

and i say that even though I detest valentine's day
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2011   Writer
*laughs* I am not so much for valentine's day either..
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shortskilz17 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2011
I love it!! cute! =) <3
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2011   Writer
I'm so happy you do! :eager:
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BlueWolf100996 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2011  Student General Artist
I love it ^^ All of your poems are so beautiful and inspiring~ It's perfect for Valentine's Day ^^ Speaking of, I hope have a happy one!~<3
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2011   Writer
Thank you! you too! you too! :glomp:
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lunas-brightlight Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2011
If you are loved for your poems, it is because that is how you show your heart. And its beautiful!
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:iconablondmoment:
aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2011   Writer
Thank you so much! *smiles* :glomp:
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TwinSandwich Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
very awesome! :clap: keep it up :D
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2011   Writer
Thank you so much so so much :glomp:
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FrannieBob184 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
Adorable!!!! ^_^
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2011   Writer
Thank you for your continuous support of my writing! :eager:
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FrannieBob184 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
No problem =D :glomp:
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Filipoday Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love it
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2011   Writer
Thank you! :eager::thanks:
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