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I would like to go somewhere where I could hear you talk,
Hear you tell me everything that ever mattered to you,
And if you enjoy making out under the moonlight,
I would then like to ask you to do it again.

I would like to cuddle your hand to my chest,
Curl your hair around my sleeves,
Wipe the snow from your eyes,
And flower that little smile to soften your lips.

And I love to feel your soft lips on me,
Emotions behind everything you whisper in my ears,
Happiness in every one of your silly smiles,
Touching the spark in me that is now completely yours.
Submitted as Literature Entry to the "Be a Spark Challenge"

My spark is what gives me passion in anything I do.
Inspired by Maria
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JoPierce Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013
Oh, how lucky is Maria?

What a beautiful romantic image. You write some lovely romantic poetry. You really do. Welcome to my watch list! <3
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013   Writer
*smiles* I think only she's qualified to truly answer this question ;p
Thank you for taking your time in leaving such supportive comments :thanks::eager:
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Lived-Laughed-Loving Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
So sweet, I absolutely love the line, 'Emotions behind everything you whisper in my ears', it strikes a chord so amazing, because it's so true... words are how you say them, right?
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012   Writer
*smiles* words are also often how we feel them :)

Thank you for taking your time in leaving this feedback :hug:
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Lived-Laughed-Loving Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Touche, very true indeed
and no problem
(Though 'touche' is not the same when read without the accent, lol)
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zamira19 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
This is a very beautiful poem.

I have one thing though, discard this part of my comment if you wish, but "making out" in the third line of stanza one seems a little harsh with the text around it. Maybe "kissing" would be a better word there. I don't know. It's up to you.

I love this poem. :D
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2011   Writer
*smiles* I'm so happy you do :glomp: Thank you for taking your time in leaving this feedback :hug:
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zamira19 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Not a problem. :)
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TackyloveApple Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2011  Student Digital Artist
awwww. thats so wonderful warms my heart :)
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2011   Writer
*smiles* I'm happy it did! :eager:
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