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We hold in our kiss what you once called the beauty of a fading dream,
The light to what seems to be a way of desperation,
Or perhaps just one to break down my seams.

Your touch calls upon my skin waves upon waves of trembling need,
Leaving me in fear of your breath-taking little smiles,
A chance to lose my mind to this consolation of love in between.

But I'm the one who has been preaching the lack of beauty in a fading dream,
Lighting the light in making our own unfading dreams,
And to perhaps hoping to fall in love somewhere in between.
:pc::blushes:Sometimes the most beautiful dreams of ours comes true between what seems to be very few heartbeats of our life.
What would you give to have one come true?
For Maria

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quoctruong Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2011
There were seconds where I did not breathe at all.
Simply, your poem took my breath away. :faint:
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2011   Writer
*smiles* Thank you so much for your continuous wonderful support of my writing!! :eager:
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secret-evil Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I like how each stanza is a sequence and that they all come together.
I can't pick just one or two lines from this piece of literature..it is all well-written.
wonderful imagery. It is all well balanced.
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2011   Writer
oh thank you so much so so much for your wonderful continuous support of my writing! :eager::thanks:
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secret-evil Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
It is my pleasure. :)
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IlLeoneOnesto Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2011  Student General Artist
This is absolutely beautiful :love:
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2011   Writer
Thank you thank you! :eager::thanks:
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IlLeoneOnesto Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2011  Student General Artist
You're very very very welcome!! :eager:
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AzildaWriting Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Just dropping in to read your work for inspiration. :]
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2011   Writer
:glomp: thank you so much *smiles* Happy valentine's day to you!
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AzildaWriting Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:
Happy Valentine's Day to you too. :]
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Lonely-Insomniac Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I would do anything. Except sexual things. :XD:
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2011   Writer
LOL
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Lonely-Insomniac Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
haha :P
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AChildOfTheKing Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
needs music. :smiles: :tighthug: love it.
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2011   Writer
*smiles* Thank you :glomp:
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LoveIsMyWeaponx Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2011  Student Photographer
Another really beautiful peice from you >.<
And once more you've left me speechless...
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2011   Writer
*laughs* once again you don't know how much I appreciate your continuous support of my writing :glomp:
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Lunique7 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2011
In comparison with your poems there are no such good&appropriate words to describe how great it is:)
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2011   Writer
Oh you sweet you! Thank you! :glomp:
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quoctruong Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2011
............beyond beautiful. :heart:
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2011   Writer
Thank you so much for your continuous support of my writing! :eager::thanks:
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quoctruong Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2011
You're more than welcome. :aww:
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Louised Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2011
A well thought out poem. Nice :hmm::aww:
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2011   Writer
*smiles* Thank you louise :hug:
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nc1394 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2011  Student Writer
Keep writing you have so much natural talent...wow...thats all i can say...i would love if someone with your talent could take a look at my writing and tell me how i can improve :D thanks
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2011   Writer
Thank you so much! :eager::thanks:
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CannibalisticVampire Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
My apologies for the cynicism.....
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2011   Writer
np!
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CannibalisticVampire Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
teehehee
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CannibalisticVampire Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
i can't quite tell if this is happy or sad......

and i don't make wishes.
Leaving things up to fate often leads to disaster.
and Dreams are not reality........ dreams are a dangerous realm filled with all your innermost thoughts, desires, and fears, against which there is no protection other than to wake up.
releasing such chaos into the world sounds a jolly good way to create a living nightmare.....
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2011   Writer
Thank you for taking your time in leaving this feedback! :thanks:

I think you are absolutely right about the consequences of releasing such chaos *grins*
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CannibalisticVampire Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
i have this superserious outlook on the whole wishing concept.and also a lack of propriety in some cases. when i have something to say its hard to hold my tongue.

and no problem i like reading your stuff :)
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2011   Writer
*laughs* Thank you so much! :eager:
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CannibalisticVampire Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconbiggrinplz: of course.
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Devil-Child-Nero Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2011
when i read your writings somehow i feel so alive......i love this feeling.^^
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2011   Writer
*smiles* Thank you so much for your continuous support of my writing! :thanks:
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Devil-Child-Nero Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2011
no problem :D
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lunas-brightlight Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2011
I dont think you should have to explain anything you don't want to in your writing. If your reader was persistent, presumably nagging, then just tell them no. lol
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2011   Writer
*smiles* Some people can be exceptionally persuasive without meaning to however *grins slyly* :glomp: Thank you for the advice! :eager:
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Conprimo Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Love it. Makes me believe in love all over again.
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2011   Writer
*smiles* :eager::eager::eager::thanks:
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artandattitude Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2011  Student Photographer
I'd give up everyother day of my life to have my dream come true.
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2011   Writer
*smiles* Me too :thanks: Thank you so much for your continuous support of my writing! :eager:
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artandattitude Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2011  Student Photographer
No worries.
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fully-sorrowly-alive Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2011  Hobbyist
so beautiful! dont ever stop writing :hug:
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2011   Writer
*smiles* I will keep writing then :hug:
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fully-sorrowly-alive Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2011  Hobbyist
good :D
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blizz-ma-tizz101 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
This is beautiful. You're such a great writer. Keep up the great work! :D :heart: :hug:
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2011   Writer
Thank you so much so so much! :eager:
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