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We hold in our kiss what you once called the beauty of a fading dream,
The light to what seems to be a way of desperation,
Or perhaps just one to break down my seams.

Your touch calls upon my skin waves upon waves of trembling need,
Leaving me in fear of your breath-taking little smiles,
A chance to lose my mind to this consolation of love in between.

But I'm the one who has been preaching the lack of beauty in a fading dream,
Lighting the light in making our own unfading dreams,
And to perhaps hoping to fall in love somewhere in between.
:pc::blushes:Sometimes the most beautiful dreams of ours comes true between what seems to be very few heartbeats of our life.
What would you give to have one come true?
For Maria

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quoctruong Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2011
There were seconds where I did not breathe at all.
Simply, your poem took my breath away. :faint:
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2011   Writer
*smiles* Thank you so much for your continuous wonderful support of my writing!! :eager:
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secret-evil Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I like how each stanza is a sequence and that they all come together.
I can't pick just one or two lines from this piece of literature..it is all well-written.
wonderful imagery. It is all well balanced.
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2011   Writer
oh thank you so much so so much for your wonderful continuous support of my writing! :eager::thanks:
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secret-evil Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
It is my pleasure. :)
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IlLeoneOnesto Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2011  Student General Artist
This is absolutely beautiful :love:
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2011   Writer
Thank you thank you! :eager::thanks:
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IlLeoneOnesto Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2011  Student General Artist
You're very very very welcome!! :eager:
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AzildaWriting Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Just dropping in to read your work for inspiration. :]
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2011   Writer
:glomp: thank you so much *smiles* Happy valentine's day to you!
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