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I learned to forgive when I heard you sang in your lovely voice,
Leaving behind feelings of an undying want in me like the way you said I told you so.
And it was in high school when you first gave me that look,
Forever sealing my belief in the absolute beauty of a real smile.

I still remember the way you cried with your heart years later in sweet love,
And I wondered if you knew that I cared about you beyond your wildest dreams.
A fragile moment of eternity incomplete,
When a touch is all we need to know and understand each other so well.

It was thanksgiving when I woke up to rippling translucent waves of the ocean nearby,
A warm glow and your hands slowly feeling mine.
I thanked that time is the measurement of all that is of true value,
And wished it wasn't just another dream of an infinity complete.
The changes that occur in relationships as we age, the theme of #PennedPaper's contest I wrote this poem for hoping that my writings are worth it to earn this dA account a subscription..if not this time, then hopefully one day *smiles dreamily* Lol :blushes:

:pc::blushes:

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I opened my heart again and...
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PrInCeRj Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Student Photographer
Gr8 job
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012   Writer
thanks! :blush:
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PagesOfDreams Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2010   Writer
I had to fave this just for the ending, the powerful last stanza at least!
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2010   Writer
*smiles* Coming from you, *grins slyly* and knowing what you admitted to me, you don't know how thankful I am that you had to. lol I think this may be the first poem you've ever faved of mine. *looks thoughtful*

:glomp:
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PagesOfDreams Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2010   Writer
Nope, it's not. [link]

Also, I'm fairly certain I have added some poems from your older account to my favorites. :nod:
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2010   Writer
shhhh!

Well then it's a big sign that my writing has gotten better enough to be competitive : P
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PagesOfDreams Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2010   Writer
Why worry about competing in terms of writing? :) I say just be you! :) Write, write and be you. :hug:
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2010   Writer
*winks back knowingly*

:hug:
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PagesOfDreams Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2010   Writer
Eh...what? You feel you need to compete with me? :O :hug:
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2010   Writer
*grins slyly* You know what I meant : P
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icy-moon-shadow Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2010
Oh, this is lovely! I really like the last two lines:

I thanked that time is the measurement of all that is of true value,
And wished it wasn't just another dream of an infinity complete.

And the phrase "an infinity complete" is already awesome by itself :)
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topVase Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2010  Professional Interface Designer
lol this is unique! :)
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Moreuse Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
it's quit good actualy. i like it. To me it reminds me of how a guy can be friens with girl and as they get older they become more intamet (can't spell it) and because they know each other well they can express fealin without actualy having to use a bunch f silly words that don't really explain the exac fealing.
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LithiumJones Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
This is wonderful, truly incredible.
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dreambigdreams Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2010
like it a lot!!
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IshiKai Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2010
.. And? Please finish what you have started xD! You don't complain, do you?
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cutesketchartist Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2010
aww
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AlecWolfe Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2010
Nice... and rather sad. Best of luck for the contest.
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Lucifer-on-Earth Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2010
relly beautiful stuff there
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Stefanuche Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2010
lovely
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kat210 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2010  Student General Artist
Absolutely breathtaking. ♥
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ellamarie25 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2010
absolutely beautiful.
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KingViridian Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2010

hnnn <333
Im very happy you persued this theme x333
its one that is over looked just a bit I often find owo <3
I hope you too earn a DA subscription!! xD <3 that would be amaaaazing! pwq <3
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celticlamb Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
it's cute. Very sweet, wonderfully written dear. Great use of visual work.
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2010  Student Interface Designer
I really like it! Very few errors (and I'm not even sure if they are errors) and very well written, great job! ^^
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imaginaryXangel Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2010
so beautiful! :iconblushplz: I love it!
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FlyyPhoenix Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is pretty...good luck with the contest!
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rawwwrrrface Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2010
Nicely written! I like it :D Here's hoping *crosses fingers*
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