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I learned to forgive when I heard you sang in your lovely voice,
Leaving behind feelings of an undying want in me like the way you said I told you so.
And it was in high school when you first gave me that look,
Forever sealing my belief in the absolute beauty of a real smile.

I still remember the way you cried with your heart years later in sweet love,
And I wondered if you knew that I cared about you beyond your wildest dreams.
A fragile moment of eternity incomplete,
When a touch is all we need to know and understand each other so well.

It was thanksgiving when I woke up to rippling translucent waves of the ocean nearby,
A warm glow and your hands slowly feeling mine.
I thanked that time is the measurement of all that is of true value,
And wished it wasn't just another dream of an infinity complete.
The changes that occur in relationships as we age, the theme of #PennedPaper's contest I wrote this poem for hoping that my writings are worth it to earn this dA account a subscription..if not this time, then hopefully one day *smiles dreamily* Lol :blushes:

:pc::blushes:

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I opened my heart again and...
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PrInCeRj Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Student Photographer
Gr8 job
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012   Writer
thanks! :blush:
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CartheInsane Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
I had to fave this just for the ending, the powerful last stanza at least!
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2010   Writer
*smiles* Coming from you, *grins slyly* and knowing what you admitted to me, you don't know how thankful I am that you had to. lol I think this may be the first poem you've ever faved of mine. *looks thoughtful*

:glomp:
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CartheInsane Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Nope, it's not. [link]

Also, I'm fairly certain I have added some poems from your older account to my favorites. :nod:
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2010   Writer
shhhh!

Well then it's a big sign that my writing has gotten better enough to be competitive : P
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CartheInsane Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Why worry about competing in terms of writing? :) I say just be you! :) Write, write and be you. :hug:
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2010   Writer
*winks back knowingly*

:hug:
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CartheInsane Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Eh...what? You feel you need to compete with me? :O :hug:
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2010   Writer
*grins slyly* You know what I meant : P
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