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Leaving you breathless is worth savoring,
Like giving you pleasure and watching you drowning in lack of memory.
So I find myself sick knowing you have to go,
Feels like forever before I can even hear your voice again.

I think I'm scared of losing you,
Or simply not seeing you every day.
Not being able to hold you at night,
Not hearing your voice all the time.

I don't think I have ever anticipated a moment so long,
For a time without your wonderful love in my life.
I don't think I can keep myself from craving you either,
Just like the predictable moments before we kiss again tonight.
Have you ever felt that despite however long you've missed someone, when you get to see them again all the waiting you did don't matter anymore?
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jojomatt4ever Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
feel likes that :( and i likes this :3
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012   Writer
*smiles appreciatively* Thank you for taking your time in providing this feedback :)
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jojomatt4ever Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Welcome ^^
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StarTrekPikachu Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I'm beginning to feel this way about someone but the worst part is that he isn't gone yet. i still get to see him untell the end of this school year and then i'm in grade 12 he in collage and yet he doesn't know how i feel i'll miss sitting next to him every lunch even though we don't speak much
thanks from a friend to another for this wonderful poem! :D
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012   Writer
Thank you for taking your time in sharing this :hugs:
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Talmenar Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
every damn day!!~ Richard O'Connell :(
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012   Writer
LOL Good ;p
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Talmenar Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
:p lol
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alex-mg Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
damn right!
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012   Writer
:eager::thanks:
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vickiangel Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012
Yes!!!!!! I have definately felt that way about someone =) and i still do <3 lovely poem btw =)
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:iconablondmoment:
aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2012   Writer
Thank you so much for taking your time to write this feedback! :eager::thanks: I really appreciate your support!
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vickiangel Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2012
Ur always welcome ^^
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dancingpickles22 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2012   Writer
Beautiful <3
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2012   Writer
I'm so happy you think so! :hug:
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dancingpickles22 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2012   Writer
it was a great poem :)
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KittySib Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
some people are worth it...:)
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2011   Writer
*smiles* You are absolutely right! And love is definitely precious, real love anyway, from other people
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Shalado25 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2011
ANYYYYY TIME! =D
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2011   Writer
:) good
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Shalado25 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2011
I felt like this so many times... but I could never put it in words!
Now I read this.. and I'm stunned...this is exactly how I feel!

Beautiful!!
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2011   Writer
Thank you so very much for taking your time in leaving this comment! :thanks:
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RadicalRose Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2011
yes, yes I have. And it will never change.
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2011   Writer
Good! :eager:
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NikolleIce Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Yes, you are absolutely right. Unfortunately my boyfriend is at a quite big distance and we can't be together very frequent; When I am with him I come alive, but when he isn't with me,although we talk at the phone, I miss him deeply; and I am so scared of losing him because I love him so much

I admire your artwork! Congratz
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2011   Writer
Thank you so much for taking your time in leaving this sweet comment :hug:
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AcidFyre Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Aww, so sweet. :3 I love it. :+favlove:
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2010   Writer
Thank you so much for taking your time to leave this comment *smiles*
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AcidFyre Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Ooooh, now I remember where I know you from. :D you're welcome. :)
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2010   Writer
....where do you know me from? :O
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AcidFyre Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
I don't actually "know" you. By that I just meant that I knew your username from when I liked your poem. ^^
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2010   Writer
oh okay *laughs*
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AcidFyre Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
XD yuppers. :D
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toxic--sunrise Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2010
I really like this.
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ObstructionofQuiet Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2010
In answer to your question, yes :heart:
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topVase Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2010  Professional Interface Designer
Rly nice and so romanticly :)
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yumbulunnosthas Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2010
I like this!! ^^ yees..that´s happened to me too :/
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irishluck92 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2010
Yeah, all the time
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KingViridian Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist

aaah x3
yes, i know how this feels~ <3 Wonderfull, Wonderfull.
I love how you can capture such emotions in such a small amount of words
x3 <3 The feeling portrayed with this definatly was able to be seen within <3
I congradulate you on this x//D
It was absolutly lovely <3
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artandattitude Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2010  Student Photographer
All the time.
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ellamarie25 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2010
this is beautiful. i can hardly describe how i feel about this piece.. which is a good thing.
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Lonely-Insomniac Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
i anticipate the moment :)
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bananasprinkles Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2010
Yes. This is very strong with words and I hope you write more!
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in-the-dead-pixel Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2010
absolutely
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Yessie1311 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2010  Student
How heartwarming. That's very sweet!
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anime-luver768 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2010
This is beautiful... I know the feeling all too well....
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TellMeWhereItHurts Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2010
"Leaving you breathless is worth savoring,
Like giving you pleasure and watching you drowning in lack of memory."


Wow! These two lines are the best lines I've read in a long time. They describe a love so passionate and lustful that sent shivers down my spine...
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zamira19 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Love it. :) <3
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Panda-Poodle Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2010  Student General Artist
It's an interesting feeling, though I've never experianced it.
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coheedcurly Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2010
i'm leaving for college in two months. my boyfriend is finishing high school this year. this is exactly how i feel. and ti sucks.
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