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I wish I know when you mean to kiss me,
And when you are simply reacting to me.
Whether you mean to stir up my inside,
Or if you just want to touch my hand.

I thought of all this when I woke up today,
Thinking of all the beautiful things you are everyday...

And as I tried to tame this feeling in my chest,
I realized that an hour has already gone by.
When was the last time you wondered badly how someone truly felt about you?

True love is eternal, but sometimes it can also be an eternal blond moment...for fools like me ;p

I'm pretty sure now she doesn't read my poems anymore.
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:iconkaedegirl:
Kaedegirl Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is wonderful! Thanks for your art!
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014   Writer
thank you :hug:
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Nohimase Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013
time flies fast in this nostalgia
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013   Writer
*smiles* You are right. It also flies fast when we discovers healthier relationships just as heart warming :)
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thisonesforthelonely Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Student Photographer
I hadn't realised how much i'd missed reading your work, until I read this and cried. How I have missed you. :heart:
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013   Writer
...:glomp:!
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:iconjjthedemon:
jjthedemon Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013
I love this. I don't go on this website often anymore but you are definitely one of the main reasons I do not simply close down my account
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013   Writer
*smiles suddenly* :glomp: I wondered where you have been ;p :hug:
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:iconjjthedemon:
jjthedemon Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013
I just randomly appear to read your new poems :)
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:iconablondmoment:
aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013   Writer
LOL
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:iconjjthedemon:
jjthedemon Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013
Whats so funny about the compliment?
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:iconablondmoment:
aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013   Writer
Never heard someone laugh out of happiness, not funniness? ;p
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:iconjjthedemon:
jjthedemon Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013
Nope I never have!
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:iconablondmoment:
aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013   Writer
*laughs* :) I am sure you will have the opportunity ;p
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Music-ItsMyLife Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Student Writer
I love your writing c:
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013   Writer
:eager::eager::glomp:!
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Music-ItsMyLife Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013  Student Writer
:iconcocoglompplz:
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Spring-Yellow Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013
i enjoy your work
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:iconablondmoment:
aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013   Writer
I'm happy you do! :eager:
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Spring-Yellow Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013
may i ask when you started writing? you know how to really make your words flow off a page.
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013   Writer
Since many years ago :) They started horribly ;P
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Spring-Yellow Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013
aha,thats always how it is in the beginning lol
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TheHonestMan Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013
Looonngg time no see!
I don't really frequent deviantART all that much anymore, but even so, when I do happen to log in it's always nice to see you've written something new ^_^ .
Easy to relate to everything you write about, that's for sure.
Though, that's sad that she doesn't read your writing anymore. Perhaps you should just write for yourself?

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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013   Writer
Lol Thank you for your wonderful and continuous support of my writing. *smiles* You are right, perhaps I should...:hug:
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TheHonestMan Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013
No problem, Logan! ❤
But mhm, most of the time it's better to move on -- have to keep up your mental health after all x'D
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013   Writer
*laughs* maybe..hope you are doing well!
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A-Mocha Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Student General Artist
Your poems are so easy to relate to and relaxing. <3 A true pleasure to read.
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012   Writer
You are very sweet. Thank you for taking your time in leaving this wonderful feedback :)
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A-Mocha Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Student General Artist
It's no problem at all ^^ I love reading your poems!
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012   Writer
:blush:
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:iconjust-living:
Just-living Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
<3
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012   Writer
:)
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:iconjust-living:
Just-living Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I miss you :) come on Skype sometime.
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:iconlonely-insomniac:
Lonely-Insomniac Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Why wouldn't she read them anymore?
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012   Writer
I dont know if I want to know..:) hope you liked the poem!
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Lonely-Insomniac Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I did!
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SteeKira Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Student General Artist
Very beautiful. :) I, personally, enjoy reading your poems whenever you write them. It's like that relaxing cup of hot tea after a tiring day.
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012   Writer
*laughs* Oh you definitely often pop up at the most random of times with a good comment to make me smile :) :hug:
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SteeKira Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Student General Artist
:hugs: anytime bro!
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TayaTaske Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful. :)
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aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012   Writer
I'm happy you like it!
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